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I'm the type of person who showers in the morning.
Everyday i make so many mistakes.
I stand under the brisk spray as i remember each day.
Constantly i yell at those who help me.
The water shocks me awake as i shiver and shake.
Sometimes i reflect on the hearts i break.
Arctic rapids warm and heat me til my body relaxes
I feel a hot passionate hate towards my life.
Red water rushes down my neck cindering the sins of my life away.
Everything is cleansed by a hot morning shower.
Everyday i make so many mistakes.
I stand under the brisk spray as i remember each day.
Constantly i yell at those who help me.
The water shocks me awake as i shiver and shake.
Sometimes i reflect on the hearts i break.
Arctic rapids warm and heat me til my body relaxes
I feel a hot passionate hate towards my life.
Red water rushes down my neck cindering the sins of my life away.
Everything is cleansed by a hot morning shower.
I am not much of a writer. I have always kind of just wrote when i'm bored. I have seen some amazing writers here, and it would be nice to get better. so please, any criticism would be worth a lot to me.
I am not a poet, I just write whatever i'm thinking.
I am not a poet, I just write whatever i'm thinking.
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